Book review 2-1

The flying machine
At first, Nadim who is boy and hid father and mother had been to America. They fly to home. Nadim like flying, but his father doesn’t like flying. A steward took Nadim through the aero plane. He could watch the flight deck and the captain.
After Nadim got home, he met Anneena. Anneena is a girl. She picked up the magic key. This story is the magic key’s story too. The magic took them back in time. There were two men. They are twins. They make a flying machine, and there was no the flying machine in the time. Nadim and Anneena advise the twins about shape of propeller and wing.
They make machine, but they don’t know that it can fly. One of the twins got into the machine and started the engine. But it can’t fly. Suddenly there was a noise, it sounded like an engine. It came from up in the sky. An aero plane was flying. The pilot is Wilbur Wright. He and his brother are the first men to fly. First twins have not been Wright brothers, (185)